Upcoming changes: character art, story changes


I'm hiring someone to redo the character art (initial sketches above). I will probably start integrating the new art as soon as it's available.

In terms of story changes: I will be removing the character Umeji Misa and her entire route. While I like the conceit behind her route, she doesn't fit with the rest of the group -- she's a downer character and not close with the other characters at the beginning of the story -- and she doesn't have a strong role in the plot. Her route has too much in common with other routes, and it can't be held up by her personality.

I've gotten some feedback on the dialogue suggesting I tone down some of the more extreme attributes -- tone down Ai's salty language, Aoi's cutesy language, and Kuroneko and Mimi's causticness. I plan to do a heavy rewrite of dialogue from the core story in the near future.

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manna-for-our-malices-alpha-mac.zip 195 MB
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manna-for-our-malices-alpha-win.zip 200 MB
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manna-for-our-malices-alpha-osx.zip 195 MB
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Manna for our Malices alpha (all platforms) 250 MB
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