Upcoming changes: character art, story changes


I'm hiring someone to redo the character art (initial sketches above). I will probably start integrating the new art as soon as it's available.

In terms of story changes: I will be removing the character Umeji Misa and her entire route. While I like the conceit behind her route, she doesn't fit with the rest of the group -- she's a downer character and not close with the other characters at the beginning of the story -- and she doesn't have a strong role in the plot. Her route has too much in common with other routes, and it can't be held up by her personality.

I've gotten some feedback on the dialogue suggesting I tone down some of the more extreme attributes -- tone down Ai's salty language, Aoi's cutesy language, and Kuroneko and Mimi's causticness. I plan to do a heavy rewrite of dialogue from the core story in the near future.

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Version 1 Nov 25, 2017
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Version 1 Nov 25, 2017
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Version 1 Nov 25, 2017
manna-for-our-malices-alpha-win-linux.zip 242 MB
Version 29 15 days ago
manna-for-our-malices-alpha-mac.zip 195 MB
Version 14 Nov 23, 2017
manna-for-our-malices-alpha-win.zip 200 MB
Version 16 Dec 30, 2017
MannaforourMalices-alpha-linux.tar.bz2 201 MB
Version 11 Dec 30, 2017
manna-for-our-malices-alpha-osx.zip 195 MB
Version 1 Nov 25, 2017
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Version 2 Dec 30, 2017
manna-for-our-malices-alpha-win-osx-linux.zip 218 MB
Version 1 Nov 25, 2017
Manna for our Malices alpha (all platforms) 251 MB
Version 2 Dec 30, 2017
manna-for-our-malices-alpha-win-linux.zip 211 MB
Version 1 Nov 25, 2017
manna-for-our-malices-alpha-win-linux.zip 242 MB
Version 2 Dec 30, 2017

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